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Brody's Ghost Rough vs Final by markcrilley Brody's Ghost Rough vs Final by markcrilley
It's always interesting to compare the rough version of a Brody's Ghost page with the final. Some people say they actually prefer the rough (which makes me wonder if I'm wasting my time adding all the detail and toning!).

Big thank you to anyone who supports me by getting my books!

All 3 "Brody's Ghost" books at Amazon: [link]
"Mastering Manga" book at Amazon: [link]
All 4 “Miki Falls” books at Amazon: [link]
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ThexMadxChesire Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that escalated quickly lol but ur a great artist n have awesome books n im in the process of making one too :3
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battlecruiser006 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
I think I know who the identity of the penny killer is.
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Amanda1756 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have your Mastering Manga book, and sister loves your Akiko series
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roninblade7 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student General Artist
I wish I could draw backgrounds and perspective like you...
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CyborgROX Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this series, man. Can't wait for the sixth book!
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CyborgROX Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uh, fifth* >_>
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11PHAEDRA Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love it, looks really cool
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zinske Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i remember this is in the mastering manga book that i have.
by the way i'm soooo grateful to you, if it wasn't for you i wouldn't be able to do half of the stuff that i can do now i mean i can draw with a pen with out messing up! ^_^ the link right here shows all of my progress up to now.

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[link] please look at them for me pwease? :iconpuppywantplz:
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RKlein555 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This has become my favorite comic series, and when I do my manga, I try to use a similar art style. Because this just works really well!
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sokkas-boomerang Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
OOO! I saw this in your book 'Mastering Manga!' It is AMAZING! It helped me more than any other book I've ever read on manga! I thank you for making it, master. :worship:
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ScribbleBug Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
I love the rawness and energy that are in rough sketches, but the final product looks so cinematic and epic. Both are great, and I LOVE the all the detail that you put into your work. Thanks for sharing your talent!
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kiger8kiger Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
This is awesome! Reminds me of an old Dutch story about a cunning fox. There were two versions of the story on each page. The old/middle Dutch on the first one and the normal Dutch version on the other to make the story clearer for the reader. I guess you did exactly the same but with drawings! :D
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air482 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
i think the tone is amazing i love it :)_^_^_^_^_^_^_
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deidaratsurugi Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Artist
yoooo markcrilley you are here too thanks for your support i love you
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NinjaFox8 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, I saw this in your book Mastering Manga! A copy of which I happen to be a proud owner of. :3

Thank you for making that book by the way. I owe my current ability to both it and your Youtube videos. :thanks:
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Jake-Kita Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I personally find it amazing to compare the Rough Draft vs a Final product. There are vast amounts of changes and for example, if you look at the rough, you would have no idea what to expect however, the final shows eveything.
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Death-Shape Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
does Mark add tone with computer?
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Anto90 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, with photoshop I think :)
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hunterofsouls13 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Student Filmographer
yes, he does and with photoshop. most to all manga and comic book artist use photoshop to color their works
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Death-Shape Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i think Masashi Kishimoto ( creator of Naruto ) do all work with computer - but probably not cuz he started doing manga in 1998 ( i think? ) and i don't think computers were good enough to add all those tones and besides... Tablets in 1998? :D
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hunterofsouls13 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Student Filmographer
i dunno thats when i was born
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Hobbsy1023 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey Mr C hobbs here again. Going to be using some of your art in my college classes hope you don't mind :P I like this one the most as it shows how you went from a rough scetch into the final page. Showing the big jump looks really cool side by side.
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Altaia Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nah, the final is infinitely better. You're a pro.
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JadeMitchell85 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
[link] Love your artwork! you inspire me so much i sketched some of your work! nothing compared to you though lol
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ChrissyThePegasister Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wasn't this comparison in Mastering Manga?
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KyMel12 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Actually yes ^^
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Misszebrahat96 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Your My Favrite Artis Ever!!!!! i love your work and your youtube viedos taught me sooooooo much! i would never be this good at Manga if you didnt help me out Thanks you sooooooo much now if i could just get drawing backround as good as i am with MAnga then I would not know what to say!
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Flo-Jitz Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
so.... much... detail!
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kira-kun445 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
wow cliffhanger. thanx a bunch
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MissHayleyQuinn Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah :faints:
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vampiresongka Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Artist
i personally love rough sketches but maybe because of one of my favorite old school artists that is doing that now. =) but the final is also really nice. the detail and toning polishes it
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blackkitt11798 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student General Artist
god u have a talent... can u look at my work and give me pointers
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May-Brush Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
Both look awesome xD. I love your art :)
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manga109005 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i hope the manga i plan to create will be as good as yours
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azumibird Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to draw manga too!! >.<
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SakuraSadameWingz Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
This looks awesome. I like sketches sometimes too, so it's nice that you keep a scan or copy of the sketch. I really like how amazing everything looks when you finish it up though. All the tiniest details amaze me, especially because it shows how much effort you're willing to put into your work. So, I don't think you should feel that you're wasting your time. =] Great work on this. ^^
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Customsonicfreak711 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
they look very cute as rough sketches XD
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MichaelaElse Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It would be very helpful if you could make a video demonstrating how you do your toning as I have no idea on how to go about it after I've made my rough and final pages on paper.

If you could do this I would be grateful by recieving this much needed guidence.

Michaela Else
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AntuanSanz Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you are draws are always incredible. thx a lot, im waiting for buy one of your mangas :D
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Zelakiel Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
the final page looks awesome! well done! :D
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JulieAnfinsen Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist
I like both of them, but as I love details, I'll go for the final version :')
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Hiroto-Chan Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
That's a really rough drawing! And then suddenly comes all these things that couldn't be made out from the rough version! It's so cool!
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PaintedDaisies Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012   General Artist
I can't find your art book at any Canadian book stores. Looks like I'll just have to order it~
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grimmjowvsl Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this is amazing! i like them both :D the rough makes it appear more comical and fun while the final really gets you in-depth with the characters and story :heart:
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hapzy Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like the finished version I'm always trying to add details like that so keep it up
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Sesshomarusama3 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
really cool!
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sullenTOMBOY777 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
the rough looks like its my actual work XD
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ulawan5 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
the rough IS very pretty :)
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Shoyrcloud Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
Finished is better, but I prefer the rough faces and expressions way more.
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BladeWithin Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think they both look fine^U^ The rough sketch looks cute but the final looks amazing!!!
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