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Behind the Scenes: Dialogueby *markcrilley

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Traditional / Books & Novels

I thought folks might enjoy seeing a small sample of dialogue writing--and rewriting--from Miki Falls. As is often the case, you'll see that there are even a few more changes between the rewritten dialogue and what ended up in the final book.

Often changes are made at the request of the editor, but in this case all the changes were my own: I guess I was trying to get all the humor I could out of this cheerful truck driver's one-and-only appearance in the series...

love 2 2

joy 2 2

wow 1 1

~~mad 0 0~~

~~sad 0 0~~

~~fear 0 0~~

~~neutral 0 0~~

!ShootingStarla Jun 17, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thank you for sharing this with us

~xalicesmileyfacex Jun 3, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

I think it worked really well x

!peacenluv10101 Oct 7, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Heres what i do, if your using a pencil you take the eraser and lightly make streaks with it across the windsheild

~so-shipsahoy Mar 20, 2010 Digital Artist

I really like the newspaper comic -style quality your manga, at least in this case has. It's really unique and lovely, it kind of brings feelings of nostalgia, like this is what happened long ago, and one of those three are remembering it, or something.

~Senn-Zado May 15, 2009

awesome panel

~x-Silver-Starlight-x Jan 29, 2009 Hobbyist

She's either in love or a nutcase....or both!

Personally, I vote both!

~johannady2 Aug 22, 2008 Hobbyist Digital Artist

i think it worked....
i have a similar problem drawing transparent things...

~InspirationDruid26 Jun 30, 2008

Haha...one of my favorite lines from Winter. xD However insignificant, I still love it lots!

!hazonku May 1, 2008

Not really sure it worked? Um I got it right away. I think the light on the windshield look is about as perfect as it'll get for your art style & this is one panel I really like more than some others in Winter. This is just one of the panels that I can appreciate more than others for the artistic value.

~SakuraSadameWingz Jan 20, 2008

Wow. That's really interesting.

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