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Behind the Scenes: Dialogue by markcrilley Behind the Scenes: Dialogue by markcrilley
I thought folks might enjoy seeing a small sample of dialogue writing--and rewriting--from Miki Falls. As is often the case, you'll see that there are even a few more changes between the rewritten dialogue and what ended up in the final book.

Often changes are made at the request of the editor, but in this case all the changes were my own: I guess I was trying to get all the humor I could out of this cheerful truck driver's one-and-only appearance in the series...
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ShootingStarla Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for sharing this with us :)
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xalicesmileyfacex Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I think it worked really well x
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peacenluv10101 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Heres what i do, if your using a pencil you take the eraser and lightly make streaks with it across the windsheild ;)
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MorganMeryl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010   Digital Artist
I really like the newspaper comic -style quality your manga, at least in this case has. It's really unique and lovely, it kind of brings feelings of nostalgia, like this is what happened long ago, and one of those three are remembering it, or something.
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Senn-Zado Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
awesome panel
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x-Silver-Starlight-x Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009  Hobbyist
She's either in love or a nutcase....or both!

Personally, I vote both!
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johannady2 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think it worked....
i have a similar problem drawing transparent things...
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InspirationDruid26 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2008
Haha...one of my favorite lines from Winter. xD However insignificant, I still love it lots! :heart:
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hazonku Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
Not really sure it worked? Um I got it right away. I think the light on the windshield look is about as perfect as it'll get for your art style & this is one panel I really like more than some others in Winter. This is just one of the panels that I can appreciate more than others for the artistic value.
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SakuraSadameWingz Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
Wow. That's really interesting.
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